Question:
Should I have failed this assignment?
anonymous
2008-03-03 09:39:32 UTC
The assignment was to write an essay about our best friend. It was supposed to be 2 pages minimum and talk about how we met this person, what we like to do together, and why you trust them.

I don't have a best friend, I don't like the term 'best friend' it's such a label. I have 4 close friends, who I can tell anything to. I wrote 4 two page essays, each one meeting all the criteria, plus one more explaining why none of them are my 'best friend' and that I love them all for different reasons.

My english teacher failed me on this assignment, he said I didn't do it properly, that I couldn't follow directions and that I was slacking. I wrote 5 times as much as I had to! How on earth is that slacking?

Can someone please explain to me why I failed?

BTW, I could lose my english credit because of this.
Eight answers:
suezzle
2008-03-03 09:59:23 UTC
I'd DEFINATELY have your parents speak with the principle about this (or you, speak to the Dean, if you're in a college class).



That was above-and-beyond what he asked for, and showed your morals and dedication to your friends. It showed that you are very proud of your strong bonding abilities to your friends - something that should be ADMIRED by your teacher, not discouraged. Different people have different life experiences, and just because yours aren't exactly as his had been, doesn't mean they're wrong in any way. And if you took the time to explain WHY you felt how you did - then you did NOT do the assignment wrong.



Now, if this was DEBATE class, or even Speach class, it'd be different, as even if you don't agree with a topic - you still have to talk about it as specifically directed (artistic liberty is not encouraged). But English class is supposed to encourage you as a student to be able to express yourself and your ideas in a well thought-out and clearly dictated manner.



To be completely fair however, in regards to your grammar and such, as well as how well you stayed on the topic, I cannot comment on, as I have not seen your work, nor the directions for the assignment along with it. I don't doubt that you did well on this - I'm simply stating the facts, that it COULD be the case as to why he graded you poorly (but probably not).
embroidery fan
2008-03-03 10:07:33 UTC
Hi,



You might want to show this answer to your English teacher.



I was a School Psychologist for 21 years, so I can see this problem from both points of view.



From your point of view:

1) You did the assignment, at least once. Your teacher could have shredded all but one essay, graded it, and the assignment would have been done.

2) You did MORE than the asignment asked, thus showing a high work ethic, high motivation to express yourself verbally, and an understanding of the assignment, plus larger implications of the meaning of the assignment than were asked.

3) Overachievement could not possibly be considered "slacking".



From your teacher's point of view (some ideas!)--I cannot speak for the other person:

1) The assignment was for a discrete 2-page essay about ONE friend. If you had turned in only one essay, any one of them, it would have met the criteria. Doing otherwise did NOT follow the directions for the assignment.

2) Practically, the teacher has many essays to grade. By turning in 8-9 pages, you just burden the teacher with extra paperwork, needing to be sifted through.

3) Part of school is to prepare you for a future workplace. In the future workplace, you need to follow directions. If my supervisor wanted a psych report on a student, she did not want 4 little reports; she wanted A psych report on A student. Knowing to follow directions is vital, in workplaces.

4) Part of English is to teach you critical thinking. This has two parts:

a) You showed critical thinking by not agreeing with the concept of "best friend." That was fine. The better way to have informed your teacher that you had the skill, would have been to write the one essay, with a concluding paragraph involving an incisive argument that the concept of "best friend" is a spurious one, and that you see it as limited, perhaps. That would have met the assignment, plus demonstrated your critical thinking skills.

b) By writing the many essays, you demonstrated your critical thinking skills, YES; just in an inefficient way. The inefficiency of your thought process was the "slacking" part. Would Bill Maher have written 5 essays, or one incisive essay? Great writers write concise, incisive essays. My guess is your teacher would have rewarded an essay with a conclusion that critiqued well, and incisively, the concept of "best friend." The teacher may have even changed the assignment in the future, based on your thinking about it!

5) Because you did the assignment "incorrectly", by definition, you came across to an adult as a rebellious, argumentative-type person. I may not think that, but that is how that behavior could easily have come across to a teacher.

6) On the other hand, to "fail" the student seems an inaccurate assessment, as well. Failure implies an inability to do the assignment AT ALL ACCEPTABLY, and that was not the case, here. You could, still, have randomly picked one essay and shredded the others; you had that choice. Even a D- would appear more "fair" in the eyes on an impartial observer than a complete failure on the part of a student who did, indeed, write "one essay about a best friend," if she did as she described.



MY SUGGESTION TO BOTH PARTIES:



I would suggest that this student demonstrated some critical thinking skills that did, in some ways, go above-and-beyond that of the norm (unless you are in a setting such as Harvard, or another prestigious college environment).



I believe the student has the potential to do the asignment correctly, now that she understands some of the concepts involved in the teacher's point of view.



As the grade may be critical to passing, I would request that the student be given another assignment, to be done in a relatively short period of time (such as one weekend, or even in class over a one-hour period), on a topic of the teacher's choice. This would offer the student a chance to demonstrate her critical thinking and writing skills, and the grade would "stick."



This would be a compromise, offering the student the chance to prove her true English composition skill in a high-pressure situation, and the teacher the chance to test the student, and to give her one more chance.
anonymous
2008-03-03 10:05:36 UTC
1) It is really important to stick to the task assigned to you. you english teacher was expecting a quality work not a quantitative work(please dont take it otherwise, i dont mean that your 5 pages were having a poor quality) but you could have edited the essay to two pages work which you were asked to.

2) the concept of close friend that you have is same as the best friend (which your teacher was expecting) so you dont need to explain the difference.

3) i will just give you an example why sticking to the task is important: consider that you are a executive in WalMart, now you have to submit a report to your CEO and you prepare a 4 pages report which is really good. do you think that your CEO has enough time to read this thing? no! your task here was to give him a BRIEF idea. this may seem irrelevant to you for a moment but give a proper thought to it.

i will suggest you to edit your essay to 2 pages and show it to your teacher again, i am sure he will like your work. Best Luck!
actormyk
2008-03-03 09:54:32 UTC
At one point, it simply pays to suck it up and do the assignment AS ASSIGNED regardless of your own personal opinions of the term "best friend." You may be able to ask the teacher if you could attempt it again, and then just to get him on your side, ask if he has any suggestions or if one of the four friends' paper sounds most promising than the others then use that one and make it conform to what is expected of the assignment. He's not so concerned with your ideas on best friends or soulmates, he only wants to see how well you write and can convincingly state your case. He was probably just trying to choose a topic that he thought everyone could knowingly write on.
kicking__it
2008-03-03 09:50:16 UTC
I would say that the basis for the failure, from the teacher's point of view, is that you challenged their assignment and rebelled against what was asked of you. He didn't ask you to take a soap box on whether or not you agreed with the concept of a "best friend," he asked you to write about your relationship with a friend. Instead of doing the simple thing of choosing a friend and following the assignment, you decided to go on a tangent about why you don't believe in best friends, and you thought that by doing the exercise 5 times, you would get more credit. However, teachers don't like to grade more than they have to anymore than students like to do more than they have to, and they don't like students to be creative with their assignments (unless they specifically ask for that creativity, which he clearly did not).



Do I agree with the failure? If the basis is following directions .. yes. I think you have a right to make your stand, but you should know your audience before you do so.
Maybe I'm Amazed
2008-03-03 09:53:24 UTC
No, I think that teacher was wrong. It sounds like you made an extraordinary effort to complete the assignment to the best of your ability given the parameters of the assignment. After all, you could made up an imaginary "best friend" and passed it off as true. You were honest. Your teacher is being pig-headed. That really sucks I hope you do not lose your credit because of this.
DrIG
2008-03-03 15:28:59 UTC
You did not do the assignment./ You handed in a number of pages indicating why you could not do the assignment./ That was wrong and the reason that you did not receive any credit
anonymous
2008-03-03 09:50:44 UTC
the theme was best friends ( if you don't have one, make one up for the sake of the grade) maybe your teacher failed you for not realizing the theme of the essay



and it's impossible that i didn't have any best friends ( CHILDHOOD FRIEND ) or something





plus a rant for the teacher , oh come on you could have at least gave her/him a C+ since she/he wrote a four paged essay


This content was originally posted on Y! Answers, a Q&A website that shut down in 2021.
Loading...